feedback on pitch

we presented our pitch to our class and the feedback that we received was mainly positive. people thought that our idea was good and that it could work quite well. they also said that we will have to be careful of the age of actors that we use so that it doesn't become unbelievable.
also, the mustache should be a disguise instead of a mans actual facial hair as this may be more realistic and less comical.
we are now considering on using a daytonight filter which will allow us to shoot footage during the day but change it to look asif it was shot at night once we have loaded it up onto the computer